Hello.
The lyrics Leonard did for the song, The Traitor.
(00.16)
I’m standing here alone,
And everyone else is dead
I’m the reason, I’m the murderer
How could they have seen this come?
I was always their friend.
Been with them, hand in hand
How could I
Have done this to them?
It’s not right, not again.
I‘m crying but it’s too late
Their eyes will never see again
Their pain I feel, a hundred-fold
Wanna say I’m wrong, but to whom?
Feel the pain
Live the sorrow
But there ain’t gonna be a tomorrow
Wanna say I’m sorry
I don’t wanna be a traitor, no! no more!!!
I’m standing here alone
Bloodied knife, broken bones.
Hands I’ve once held
Now they’re no more.
Feel the pain, the misery
I don’t wanna be the rat.
But it’s too late for regrets,
They are all gone,
Stabbed in the back
Someone please, stab me back!
Feel the sorrow
Live the misery
We were once friends,
Not enemies
Laughing faces,
Fade in the wind
Blood and gore, fall like rain
(3.20)
I watched my friends,
Falling down,
One by one, life blown out
Feel the misery,
Live my death
I can’t breath
Not this air
(4.00)
I can’t feel my legs,
I can’t feel my pain
I can’t feel my sorrow,
I can’t see my friends.
The traitor that I am…(Whisper after song has ended)
Kudos to him for his effort, a well written one too!
Thank you very much Leonard! Anyways, please comment on this too in the tagboard, so that Leonard can improve as a lyricist as well! Thank you.
P.S. Send in more Lyrics to me! Lets all learn together!
Friday, November 14, 2008
Saturday, November 8, 2008
Kite.Sky.
Hello.
New Song UPLOADED! Its above this post, no. 2, "Kite. Sky.".
This piece is for my 'O' level examination, which i composed in 4 weeks during august. The song talks about how a kite is attached to a string, and then finally finding freedom in the sky - when the string breaks. (or at least that is what the poem is trying to talk about =D) So, i thought a feeling a hope should be injected into the song, thus, this song should be in the major key too (happy sounding!).
Okay, here is the poem!
The kites in the sky,
Flew to win,
In the fall
The kites in the sky,
Did not know,
How to fall
One kite, Lost its tail,
and discovered, FLIGHT!
Nice? LoL. Its from cambridge. Anyway, hope you guys like the song! Remember to give me comments and vote beside this post!
THANK YOU!
New Song UPLOADED! Its above this post, no. 2, "Kite. Sky.".
This piece is for my 'O' level examination, which i composed in 4 weeks during august. The song talks about how a kite is attached to a string, and then finally finding freedom in the sky - when the string breaks. (or at least that is what the poem is trying to talk about =D) So, i thought a feeling a hope should be injected into the song, thus, this song should be in the major key too (happy sounding!).
Okay, here is the poem!
The kites in the sky,
Flew to win,
In the fall
The kites in the sky,
Did not know,
How to fall
One kite, Lost its tail,
and discovered, FLIGHT!
Nice? LoL. Its from cambridge. Anyway, hope you guys like the song! Remember to give me comments and vote beside this post!
THANK YOU!
Friday, November 7, 2008
HAPPY!
Hello.
Yesterday was the first day my blog came about, and you guys were already here to see see & look look! So Happy got Visitors! =D Thank you so much for viewing this humble blog of mine, as it starts to grow bigger and bigger! LoL.
Anyways, the Blog would only be interesting if i have more songs to post! (will be posting 1 more soon!) In order to achieve that, i would be working hard to produce more songs for you guys to listen to!
Because of that, i have an idea! Why not...
You guys could come up with a storyline, tell me something that has happen to you, or even an event that you would like to have a song of! I CAN write a song out of that for YOU! It would be a Great Challenge for me to write songs for other people, also it would be a drive for me to produce more songs!
Therefore, I sincerely hope that you guys can share things with me and provide me with more ideas to write songs about! (my experiences are limited!)
Anyways, THANK YOU FOR VOTING AND LISTENING TO THE TRAITOR!!!
ALSO, please wait for the next song!
Yesterday was the first day my blog came about, and you guys were already here to see see & look look! So Happy got Visitors! =D Thank you so much for viewing this humble blog of mine, as it starts to grow bigger and bigger! LoL.
Anyways, the Blog would only be interesting if i have more songs to post! (will be posting 1 more soon!) In order to achieve that, i would be working hard to produce more songs for you guys to listen to!
Because of that, i have an idea! Why not...
You guys could come up with a storyline, tell me something that has happen to you, or even an event that you would like to have a song of! I CAN write a song out of that for YOU! It would be a Great Challenge for me to write songs for other people, also it would be a drive for me to produce more songs!
Therefore, I sincerely hope that you guys can share things with me and provide me with more ideas to write songs about! (my experiences are limited!)
Anyways, THANK YOU FOR VOTING AND LISTENING TO THE TRAITOR!!!
ALSO, please wait for the next song!
Labels:
more songs,
next song,
storyline,
Thank you
Thursday, November 6, 2008
The Traitor
Hello.
FIRST SONG uploaded! Its above this post, titled "The Traitor" - (the name of the poem we had to fit our song into). This song was written for my prelim 2 (around May), with some help from my teacher - Mr See Chee Hang. Anyways, hope you guys will enjoy it, and then COMMENT on it please! THANKS!
P.S. Looking for a lyricist that can help me fit lyrics into songs i write!
Contact ME! if you are willing to try! - the-hellcat@hotmail.com
FIRST SONG uploaded! Its above this post, titled "The Traitor" - (the name of the poem we had to fit our song into). This song was written for my prelim 2 (around May), with some help from my teacher - Mr See Chee Hang. Anyways, hope you guys will enjoy it, and then COMMENT on it please! THANKS!
P.S. Looking for a lyricist that can help me fit lyrics into songs i write!
Contact ME! if you are willing to try! - the-hellcat@hotmail.com
my BLOG
Hello.
This blog has been set up for a special purpose, to SHARE my music compositions with the world out there! I have been writing a few songs (using sibelius), for 'O' level music, and have since been in love with composing (pop songs only! cant write classical songs for nuts!).Sadly, all of them are only in midi file format. But nevermind, hopefully one day i would be able to own my own recording studio and have my songs recorded! (=D) Now, let me explain the purpose of this blog.
- Firstly - This blog will be a tool for me to publish my compositions!
- Secondly - This blog will be a commenting machine for people to comment on my compositions! Giving me comments will make me improve!
- Thirdly - This is a bit ambitious, but i hope that this blog will eventually become a blog where people are able to send in compositions to my email, and i will publish it on this blog!A place where original compositions by teenagers can be heard!
So, in order to achieve the third objective, all of you song writers out there can send your compositions to this email address :
the-hellcat@hotmail.com (my email address!)
ANY KIND OF SONGS WILL DO! Thank You!
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